‘Wake up dad wake up Hurry we got to get in the car and turn up there before anybody else’ I puffed out of mouth. Ok ill just need to get dressed he mumbled back to me. In the next minute he was up and we were on our way to rainbows end but we had guests.There names where Tia and Ticitta. Yay we finally arrived we were the second group of people there .It finally started opening.We finally got our turn dad had to pay 200 dollars just on getting in.Then we got these wristbands. when we stepped in slowly excited to go on all the rides. When we walked in the was this boy character called rai and a girl charter called bow the n was left out. The first ride we went on was the fear fall down down down.
we sat in the seats as soon as we started going up i wanted to hop off. we went up and and up.we reached the top we stay up there for ten seconds look at that ahhhhhhhh we fell down in two seconds me and Eliala screamed.
This is a pitcher of the fear fall down down down.
We watched a 4d movie, the seats moved when you're on it there where skilottions and mermaids
is a picture of it. We went down a water slide and it was a really steep and freaky one.
This is a picture of the ride.
then we went on the stratosfear it was freaky we went upside down and your bum was of the seat. and then you flip round i screamed and closed my eyes the whole time. dad told us the ride was finished so we opened our eyes the it fliped round again and we screamed hard our. This is a picture of the ride and us upside down.
Then we wandered over to the log ride dad video us the whole time.We hooped in the log and you started to move then you go up this big hill and then you go into this cave full of dead dangerous animals.then you go back to the open.after you come to this pirate thing and then you go though a big splash of water and are in a magical place where it plays music to you then you go down the big hill.
This is a piture off the ride
Latter we went on to the pirate ship. We swing up and down and when you went down you just laughed because it tickled your tummy like someone was tickling it yourself but it was worse. This is a picture of the ride
Then we scuttled over to the rollercoaster. We had to sit in seats that had these weird seat belts.we hooped in and then we went round and up not to bad i thought.then we got to a really steep hill that went down to the loop that's when everyone started screaming then we went round this upside down thing and then we finished it was so scary. This is a picture off the loop.
Then we headed round to gold rush.we had to hop in these little cart this like a somthing you can store coal in or sometghing.it was a very fast ride.fist there was these moving people with nives then you go up this hill that takes ages then you go down a hill and stop then go agin then stop then start then the ride is over.
This is a picture of the people in a box near the slow hill.
We walked over to the bumper boats.When we got there we hopped in some little bumper boats and then we had to try start the engine i had some difficulties before when i started it then a boy splashed me so i splashed him back.He got me wet but i didn't get him wet.then a a another person splashed me real good my hair was wet.then i got eliala wet and tista.we came out socked.
This is a picture of the bumper boats and some people getting splashed.
Then we scattered over to the family carts. I wasn't tall enough to drive the cart but I could be the passenger.Tia drove the cart I thought she was going to crash but she didn't few.The track was so big it was made out of tires but the road that you drive on is concrete.
This is a picture of some people in the family cart.
Then we went back on then we went back on the fear fall.Me and Eliala said that we weren't going to screm this time. but we screamed header than ever this time i said nothing at the top.
Then we went back to then we went back to the 4d movie. There were kids screaming this time.It was the same movie though.
Latter we had to leave. on the way dad helped a man put a bike into his car.While he was doing that we saw a man with a phone on the fear fall.We also saw a man on the fear fall that screamed like a little girl.Then we went home sad and mirabile in till we started talking about rainbow's end.and dad saying go to bed know. This took me ages to write and I have wanted to share this with everyone for ages.My writing goal has been writing paragraphs.
Wow Maliesi! This gives lots of information about our trip to Rainbows End. I liked how at the start you used puffed instead of said. I think that you have done very well with your goal (Writing in paragraphs) What was your favourite ride?
ReplyDeleteWow Maliesi! This gives lots of information about our trip to Rainbows End. I liked how at the start you used puffed instead of said. I think that you have done very well with your goal (Writing in paragraphs) What was your favourite ride?
ReplyDeleteWow! This gives me a lot of information about your trip to rainbows end. It really gets me to visualize in my head how scary those rides must of been. When I went to Rainbows end I went on the fear fall aswell, its so scary. When I went down I tried to scream and it didn't come out! What would have to be your favorite ride at Rainbows end?
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