Writing sample of show not tell

When the tide breaks many things can be revealed. Like a scroll full of things you would have never known. Like Mairah who found out something that she shouldn't have been told. An innocent walk on the beach can turn into something huge but someone so little can help it all. Many things have happened to Mariah but how could this one be so unique. A twist can go very far if you don't let it go. little words like this can change the world.soon the bombs will go off and this all will be mine. Including a little girl who can read all.



Birds above can sing so bright but how can that affect our light. When you walk though a forest you cant tell what can happen. But maybe the birds that sing away just know what can happen. When the light dies and the birds fly away you stay in the Forest all alone. next thing you know you are gone.you are now in a dark room where there is nowhere to run what would you do.





Animals are so beautiful but why aren't BLOB FISH.